Dreariness of cold The fall of summer long gone Green no more 'til spring The cycle of life Nature in its glory days Hibernation gone Life renewed with warmth Springtime rids the cold in bloom Hear the singing birds? Summer has risen Another revolution Sunny days ahead Another year gone The fall of summer returned Autumn brings the chill
Written for: Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge 330 COLD & Fall
26 responses to “The Fall of Summer”
beautiful summary of the cycle of life; can’t wait for summer to return…
You got a long way to go. Come on down to Florida and you will have at least a couple more months before it gets too chilly. It’s been 67 in my house all day today. Warmer outside, but I’m good with that. It will be back up in the 80s in the next few days. 🙂
yes, I do have long wait. but today was beautiful. mid 60s and sunny…
Hey that’s pretty good. A brightness to all the chaos in America right now. 😎
I’d put up with bad weather if it meant calm and peace in the U.S. …
Well I’m late responding and I’m going to agree with you. Celebrating tonight, getting ready for Biden’s speech. Hope there isn’t a great retaliation from Trump supporters. 🇺🇸
just listened to his wonderful speech; I am looking forward to the next four years…
Me too!!! 😀
Most lovely, the words’ pictures, the phrasing.
Thank you so much! I mostly do photography, but I like to write, especially haikus. 🙂
Beautiful 💗
Thank you! I’m trying to write a little more creatively! Still working on the etsy shop so it is few & far between. I still haven’t looked at all the SLS. 🙂 hehe
I would love to have more time to write. 💜
Me too! I was hoping to get back on my book for November, but I think it will have to wait a little while longer. 🙂
I am sure we will get our books done, we can perciver.
Perciver?
Sorry predicted text persevere
Whew!!! I thought it was a new word used across the pond and not here. 😂😂😂 yes we will persevere. 😎
Lovely
Thank you so much! 🙂
NIce. You went full-on kigo with this one. All the seasons hit. Welcome to the challenge. 🙂
Thanks so much! I have you on my board now so I will be enjoying the creative writing process again. 🙂
Oh yes! Seasons in a few words – beautifully penned!
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Exciting and great depiction. Loved it.
Thank you so much. I had fun writing it. 😊