Secret – Haiku

Value the moment
a thought skewed, tortured, it slips
secrets without grace.

Delicate friendship
refined in one single act
trust shattered, instant.

Permanent damage
no reconciliation
compromised, destroyed.

Written for: Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge 333 Grace & Slip

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10 responses to “Secret – Haiku”

  1. willowdot21 Avatar

    All three are perfect πŸ’œ

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    1. Lisa Coleman Avatar

      Thank you so much! I’m so glad to see you! How are you feeling? How was the surgery? I’ve been thinking about you and praying for awesomeness! πŸ™‚

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        Hi Lisa though the surgery was successful and I was released from hospital, I was rushed back in the same night with excruciating pain, vomiting and fever. I am home now but it’s a slower and more painful process than I was expecting. It will take a six week recovery and at first quite a diet change. …but I am getting there. Thank you for caring πŸ’œ

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      2. Lisa Coleman Avatar

        Oh my goodness! I’m so sorry you went through that. I know you will feel better for the new year! 2021 is going to be a hell of lot better than 2020! So glad you are on the mend! Hugs to you! πŸ™‚

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      3. willowdot21 Avatar

        Fingers crossed πŸ’œ

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  2. J-Dub Avatar

    Beautiful 🀩 glad you went for it

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    1. Lisa Coleman Avatar

      Thanks! πŸ™‚

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  3. Jim Borden Avatar

    It’s a shame when friendships get shattered. Hopefully there’s always a chance for reconciliation.

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    1. Lisa Coleman Avatar

      Hopefully so! I had one once in high school and it was never the same. It wasn’t a secret that was told by one or the other. It was about a boy. I didn’t even know for a very long time what happened. πŸ™‚

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