DARKNESS LOOMS
shadows cast over the field
nothing to protect or shield
crack of lightning, thunder booms
air is changing, darkness looms
long before the setting sun
closer to a smoking gun
not a building or shelter in sight
will this be alright?
above...clouds close blue skies
moments tortured, will i die?
gods ticked off for no reason
or maybe it's their season
season for the disturbed
followed by being perturbed
over more than nature needs
stop the torture, death impedes
open your heart, let heaven in
shadows lift the clouds then
splashes of rain slowly subside
carry on the happy ride
a ride the horse can proudly stand
relax and enjoy the open land
breathe fresh air in your haste
your steed gallops, gets a taste
by: Lisa Coleman
Sue Vincentย is the host of Thursday Photo Prompt. "Darkness"
I live in Jacksonville, FL. I am graphic designer, writer, photographer and published author. I am now taking those passions & putting them into a blog. I love birds & consider myself a “more than average” birder. I have 3 grown children & 7 grand children plus a grandchild dog named Memphis. I’m married to my soul mate and we have a dog named Heaven. We love to travel & get out somewhere most weekends.
11 responses to “#Write Photo – DARKNESS Looms”
Lovely rhythm, Lisa.
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Thank you very much Sue! ๐
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Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much! I’m thinking of compiling my poems in another year to put them into a book.
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Thatโs great! Best wishes for the same ๐ค
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Beautiful piece
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Thank you. ๐
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This was so amazing . I felt every word with intensity.
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Thank you so much. ๐
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Your so welcome๐
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